《It's Snowing 正在下雪》

《It's Snowing》

It's snowing
without their knowing.
They're still sleeping
early in the morning,
enjoying
their warm time with snow white,
quiet
like the light snow outside.

《正在下雪》

正在下雪
他们不知晓。
他们还在睡觉,
在清晨里
享受着
他们和白雪公主在一起的温暖时分，
安静得
像外面的小雪。

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• 太棒了！小西的诗轻轻松松、自然地把生活中的点滴写得诗意盎然！最后quiet like the light snow是点睛 -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 09:34:32

• 谢谢冬夏点评鼓励。是的，当灵感闪现的时候，跟着感觉走，即兴发挥地写写诗是一种自然而又轻松的自娱自乐方式。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 10:26:55

• This piece gives readers cozy and peaceful feelings! 很棒！ -甜虫虫- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 09:40:21

• Thank you, 谢谢虫虫对美坛赏诗活动的肯定和支持！ -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 10:28:19

• A pretty poem! Good artistic mood, sounds musical too! 赞！谢谢邀 -天玉之- ♀ (93 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 09:41:13

• Thank you for your nice comment! 谢谢玉之对美坛赏诗活动的肯定和支持！ -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 10:40:20

• and who are they? -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 10:06:49

• That's the room for your imagination. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 10:42:17

• They could be children, adults, dogs, or your lovely cats :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 10:43:13

• 回头见，我先去面壁去了，the 7 dwarfs came into my mind -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 10:52:48

• 哈哈哈，移哥有灵感了！ -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 10:57:00

• Snow is so romantic that it brings tons of inspirations～ -妖妖灵- ♀ (26 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 10:16:14

• last night's storm brought tons of dump -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 10:37:16

• Didn't u make dumplings？：）Blizzard？你昨天照相时也正在下雪吗？ -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 10:57:47

• 是的 -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 11:29:56

• That's ture! 谢谢灵灵对昨天美坛赏诗活动的肯定和支持！ -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 10:47:48

• 诗中有童真！棒！ -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 10:46:49

• 谢谢盈盈的鼓励。也可能是狗真，猫真，或者老顽童真 ：） "They" 给读者留下了想象的空间。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 10:55:06

• 让人体会到幸福，温暖的小诗。羡慕睡眠好的人，早早醒来的飘过。 -天边一片白云- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 18:13:45

• 谢谢白云雅临点评鼓励。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 21:58:14

• Like fluffy white catkins drifting on a June day, -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 20:29:30

• snowflakes must be dreaming of summer. A silly thought. Haha -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 20:36:21

• A muse is always with 小西 and vice versa. Goodnight! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 20:41:15

• Thank you for your kind words. Goodnight. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 21:54:13

• Great imagination, so poetic! Thank you for sharing. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 21:52:24

• 如果出现了，肯定是有重大冤情 -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/25/2024 postreply 04:45:12

• 哈哈哈，不是六月飞雪，只是雪花梦见夏天而已。Just a dream, nothing happened :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/25/2024 postreply 09:25:36

• snowman must be dreaming of summer. please see enclosed -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (209 bytes) () 01/25/2024 postreply 06:02:21

• 欣赏了，写下了雪来去无声，却给孩子们带来欢乐。 -万湖小舟- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 10:58:19

• 谢谢小舟点评鼓励。*they"不一定就是孩子们哟，哈哈哈。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 17:10:00