咬字好清晰,听得好清楚。花费最长时间写的歌却不是最好听的歌,感觉一直一个调儿:)交作业:

 

It's a still-life watercolor
Of a now-late afternoon
As the sun shines through the curtain lace
And shadows (wash  )the room
And we sit and drink our coffee
Couched in our indifference
Like shells upon the shore
You can hear the ocean roar
In the dangling conversation
And the superficial sighs
The borders of our lives
And you read your Emily Dickinson
And I my Robert Frost
And we note our place with book (markers  )
That measure what we've lost
Like a poem poorly written
We are verses out of (rhythm )
Couplets out of rhyme
In syncopated time
And the dangling conversation
And the superficial sighs
Are the borders of our lives
Yes, we speak of things that matter
With words that must be said
Can ( analysis )be worthwhile?
Is the theater really dead?
And how the room has softly faded
And I only kiss your shadow
I cannot feel your hand
You're a stranger now unto me
Lost in the dangling conversation
And the superficial sighs
In the borders of our lives

 

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+1, PPR, 我最近再唱sound of silence感到自己发声进步不用使劲挤了,Paul的发声还挺难学的 -移花接木- 给 移花接木 发送悄悄话 移花接木 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 07:30:48

实话实说,写歌的灵感比花费的时间更重要~我怎么找半天找不到PPR的意思。他们的发声共鸣很好,也恭喜你更会发声了~ -妖妖灵- 给 妖妖灵 发送悄悄话 妖妖灵 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 07:41:38

在一片和谐的叫好声中,专门唱反调儿 PPR=party pooper ,笑坦发明 -移花接木- 给 移花接木 发送悄悄话 移花接木 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 07:47:45

There is another one similar: wet blanket. -甜虫虫- 给 甜虫虫 发送悄悄话 甜虫虫 的博客首页 (104 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 10:12:01

哈哈,第一次听这个词,学习了。我一直觉得兼听则明:) -妖妖灵- 给 妖妖灵 发送悄悄话 妖妖灵 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 10:30:18

他们? 我从来没听到过Garfunkel 的声音 -移花接木- 给 移花接木 发送悄悄话 移花接木 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 07:49:51

还真有PPR这个词,笑坛的英文水平够高啊,哈哈:)没听过Garfunkel的声音?那么好听的和声难道是一个人唱的? -妖妖灵- 给 妖妖灵 发送悄悄话 妖妖灵 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 07:57:37

我说他自己单独发声,很难听出来 -移花接木- 给 移花接木 发送悄悄话 移花接木 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 08:09:22

Bridge Over Troubled Water and For Emily are two of his solo -甜虫虫- 给 甜虫虫 发送悄悄话 甜虫虫 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 11:42:58

不对吧? sound of silence 是garfunkel 唱主旋律的啊。 -甜虫虫- 给 甜虫虫 发送悄悄话 甜虫虫 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 08:50:09

Sure? I will check again, I thought always Paul Simon -移花接木- 给 移花接木 发送悄悄话 移花接木 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 09:02:16

Some their well-known songs were sung by him. -甜虫虫- 给 甜虫虫 发送悄悄话 甜虫虫 的博客首页 (178 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 09:07:46

Really confuses me, just found 2 of their concerts live, -移花接木- 给 移花接木 发送悄悄话 移花接木 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 09:19:47

Paul lead both singings anyway/gad 2 c'em reunited @old age -移花接木- 给 移花接木 发送悄悄话 移花接木 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 09:20:24

Yes. It's confusing. I have to listen very carefully to tell -甜虫虫- 给 甜虫虫 发送悄悄话 甜虫虫 的博客首页 (68 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 09:35:20

also like sound of silence, can't sing but tried it on KB. -最西边的岛上- 给 最西边的岛上 发送悄悄话 最西边的岛上 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 07:43:30

赞作业,great job! 挺好听的歌呀。我喜欢演唱者的腔调! -盈盈一笑间- 给 盈盈一笑间 发送悄悄话 盈盈一笑间 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 08:50:45

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