First of all, let me say happy holiday to everybody here

better to use "turned" instead of "become".

Stars are scarce 稀少, clouds are thin and the jade rabbit in the maze of the moon. The annual Mid-Autumn Festival approaches with beartiful sceneries in view.

"twice" is good, but can also say "doubly homesick".

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