《Sunday, Monday, and the Other Days》《周日、周一及其他日子》

《Sunday, Monday, and the Other Days》

Sunday is short
Monday is long

are the other days in between
yes but no

having friends makes
every day the same
short but longing

《周日、周一及其他日子》

周日短暂
周一漫长

其他日子介于之间吗
是，却不是

拥有朋友让
每天都一样
短暂却渴望

所有跟帖： 

• 周一漫长，太对了！尤其是周一上午，除非开会，否则状态完全不在线。小西的诗来得太应景啦。LOL -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 08:07:08

• 盈盈平时上班，周末还要在美坛值班，盈盈辛苦了，问好！ -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 09:14:24

• 谢谢小西。前几周比较忙，最近好一些了。谢谢你的佳作。悦读欣赏～～ -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 09:36:05

• 盈盈过奖了，谢谢鼓励。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 10:22:19

• having friends makes every day the same short but longing -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 08:07:35

• 起承转合，此处转得漂亮。既呼应了前面的long 和short, 又升华了全诗的意境～～ -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 08:09:56

• You got it! Thank you for your nice comment. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 09:16:23

• 献上 the theme song of Happy Days -waterfowl- ♂ (231 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 08:29:32

• This happy days song matches my poem perfectly! 谢谢水鸟分享。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 09:21:10

• What a beautiful poem for Monday morning! -方外居士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 09:07:01

• Thank you for your encouragement! Happy Monday! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 09:23:23

• A great poem! good to read~! -cicila- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 09:23:06

• 茜西好，thank you for reading and commenting! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 09:26:10

• My poem was inspired by a comment renqiulan left here. 谢谢秋兰！ -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 09:38:01

• 秋兰10月15日（周日晚上）在盈盈发表的一个帖子下方的留言： -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 09:42:20

• "Sunday nights are notoriously short. Goodnight, everyone!" -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 09:42:41

• 详见里面的链接： -CBA7- ♀ (352 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 09:48:33

• 再读再赞小西短小哲理的好诗！七仙女写的真好！ -cicila- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 10:31:20

• 谢谢茜茜公主的美言和鼓励。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 10:34:12

• How the two meanings are connected: long(长）vs longing(渴望）？ -方外居士- ♂ (180 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 10:46:43

• One explanation: they come from different sources -7grizzly- ♀ (784 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 13:51:35

• Interesting, thanks! -方外居士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 15:18:28

• Yes, they're from different origins. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 20:05:15

• 再写一首，腊月，正月及其他月子，如何？ -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 16:08:50

• 哈哈哈，好主意，移月接日，这应该是移哥的拿手好戏吧，期待 ：） -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 20:07:28