试译网友诗 - 《晨晓》原作：梦游桃源

Dawning

 

The dawn is beaming 

Over that deep blue

Winter’s melting with that touch of spring

As that rainbow coats all creations below

Her tenderness caressing

A chime under that rim

Sweet and mellow the jingle

Echoes about to one and all

Waking the travelers

To get on where they long to go

 

The indolent souls

In a hazy world

Singing an Auld Lang Syne

To that cauldron of old

To savor for a lifetime

To forget not

The souls come alive

To the east rises the sun

All is here and all is as good

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• 感觉在听美若黎明，又像在听往日时光，又醇又香的诗，余味悠长的翻译～ -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/26/2023 postreply 20:13:33

• 谢谢欣赏和鼓励！ -小溪之水- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/27/2023 postreply 04:05:15

• 感觉这么美应该发懒。 -jianchi9090- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/28/2023 postreply 07:26:57

• 谢谢小溪之水师友有雅兴，将拙作译成英文。很遗憾，我的英文十分蹩脚，无法领略你译文的风采。祝好！ -梦游桃源- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/28/2023 postreply 14:59:24

• 谢谢梦兄寄送的灵感！一直很喜欢你写的诗。 -小溪之水- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/28/2023 postreply 16:56:20