《Not As Good As》《不如》

《Not As Good As》

Dreaming about you, not as good as
Hearing you

Hearing you, not as good as
Seeing you

Seeing you, not as good as
Smelling you

Smelling you, not as good as
Touching you

Touching you, not as good as
Falling in love with you

Falling in love with you, not as good as
Marrying you

Marrying you, not as good as
Reading you

《不如》

梦见你，不如
听见你

听见你，不如
看见你

看见你，不如
闻到你

闻到你，不如
触到你

触到你，不如
爱上你

爱上你，不如
嫁给你

嫁给你，不如
读你

 

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• 小7的诗，总是从简单的词语中品味出深刻的内涵。原来读懂一个人境界最高啊：） -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/08/2022 postreply 13:57:54

• 谢谢灵灵的鼓励。“读你" 也包括读你的作品（文字）的含义 ：） -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/08/2022 postreply 20:33:52

• 恭喜小7。首页进来，谢谢网管，《Not As Good As》《不如》推荐成功 -梅雨潭- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/08/2022 postreply 17:29:51

• 谢谢，that's so good :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/08/2022 postreply 20:35:04

• 再读再赞：） -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/09/2022 postreply 14:57:00

• 英文翻译需要进一步推敲：） -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/09/2022 postreply 14:59:00

• 谢谢小绿提醒，我也注意到了 ：） -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/09/2022 postreply 19:24:49

• good verses can’t go out of grammar -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/10/2022 postreply 11:43:00

• I agree :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/10/2022 postreply 20:50:24