诗，非诗？A Course in Miracles

事先说明，以下不是我写的。我只是节选一段文章并重新断句。我选这段是因其优美的文字和字外的意境。

A Course in Miracles

 

Beyond the body,

beyond the sun and stars,

past everything you see

and yet somehow familiar,

is an arc of golden light that stretches

as you look into a great and shining circle.

 

And all the circle fills with light

before your eyes.

The edges of the circle disappear, and

what is in it

is no longer contained at all.

 

The light expands

and covers everything,

extending to infinity,

forever shining and

with no break or limit anywhere.

 

Within it,

everything is joined

in perfect continuity.

 

Nor is it possible

to imagine 

anything could be outside,

for there is nowhere 

this light is not.

所有跟帖： 

• A poem, a nice one. Brava -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2021 postreply 12:12:00

• 谢绿绿首肯 -心存善念- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2021 postreply 12:39:16

• 细节成就了诗歌。这句话什么意思： -妖妖灵- ♀ (1220 bytes) () 11/16/2021 postreply 12:29:15

• the light is the "道"，是你，是我，是万物之始 -心存善念- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2021 postreply 12:38:07

• 开玩笑说把现代诗叫换行短文 -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2021 postreply 14:29:41

• 有时一个长句，断好了也出诗意，因为change the perspective -心存善念- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2021 postreply 16:10:01

• Light is everything! So beautiful -疏影笑寒- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2021 postreply 16:57:30

• City of Lights-^-^ -青松站- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2021 postreply 18:47:34

• 喜欢！星光之城 -心存善念- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/17/2021 postreply 07:59:43

• 很美呢！断句断得好！ -甜虫虫- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/17/2021 postreply 14:58:54

• 英文诗，还能读下去，尤其竟然是没有我不认识的字，耶~~~ -雪晶- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/18/2021 postreply 05:40:59