My Girl

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<< My Girl >>

(Listen to the Chinese folk songs for more than 2 hours, and I came up with my own .... lol)

Only about some 30 plus years ago
Your smile stole my heart and soul
Day and night I dreamed of you
Mood swing from high to low
Glad I told you my feeling and did not hold
Finally you became my girl
Holding your hand to start our 2-person show
It made me the happiest man in the world
Time flew by without taking its toll
Yesteryear's fire is still burning and will never get cold
Every glimpse of you still reminds me of our first hello
Our love story is still young, never old
I am looking forward
For another 30 years to come
Let's continue to sail our love boat
Be my captain to bring joy home

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Very nice piece; love it. Thank you for sharing. -ibelieu- 给 ibelieu 发送悄悄话 ibelieu 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 13:12:09

Thank you for liking it -以美丽回答一切- 给 以美丽回答一切 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 13:20:00

inspiration from Chinese songs? a very nice piece, bravo! -忒忒绿- 给 忒忒绿 发送悄悄话 忒忒绿 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 13:21:00

yep lol -以美丽回答一切- 给 以美丽回答一切 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 13:34:00

“只要一生爱一人”!好长时间不见回答,赶紧来参加绑架活动吧! -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (135 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 13:27:47

sorry, have been busy with work …,, -以美丽回答一切- 给 以美丽回答一切 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 13:35:00

这就是纳兰容若笔下的一生一代一双人吧。长情挚爱,让人羡慕。祝福。 -盈盈一笑间- 给 盈盈一笑间 发送悄悄话 盈盈一笑间 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 13:33:33

lol. Thanks -以美丽回答一切- 给 以美丽回答一切 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 13:35:00

我就喜欢这样的作品,灵感一来挡不住,好多佳作都是这样产生,后续可进一步完善,但这灵感一过较劲脑汁出来的就觉得dull -移花接木- 给 移花接木 发送悄悄话 移花接木 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 15:52:32

very true ???? -以美丽回答一切- 给 以美丽回答一切 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 16:12:00

very true :) -以美丽回答一切- 给 以美丽回答一切 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 16:13:00

真好! -甜虫虫- 给 甜虫虫 发送悄悄话 甜虫虫 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 20:13:08

Thanks -以美丽回答一切- 给 以美丽回答一切 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 07/15/2021 postreply 20:18:00

好诗,能看懂哈!有感觉! -天山晨- 给 天山晨 发送悄悄话 天山晨 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/17/2021 postreply 06:56:46

:) -以美丽回答一切- 给 以美丽回答一切 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 07/17/2021 postreply 07:14:00

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