Clock with a halted pendulum

Clock with a halted pendulum

I have an ancient clock
Its long pendulum, motionless
No longer connected to time
But it has a quartz heart
Dancing to the light and darkness
Ceaselessly

Trace back year after year
I can't recall
When the pendulum halted
Was it your finger or mine
That accidentally shattered
The gear bestowing eternity to the pendulum


© 13 days ago, XX   love • memory   
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Jenny Middleton - I like how visual this poem is whilst making a point about aging and holding on to a perfect moment for 'eternity'. Thought provoking share. a day ago  

 

laughingpoet - Yes, great write I had a clock like that. Wait, I still have it, it looks too nice to throw away and too expensive to repair so no worries that time has stopped.

Nicely written

 

I stayed at a boutique hotel in New Orleans years ago. I saw this old clock as described in my poem in the hotel's lobby. I gazed at the clock because I was puzzled by the motionless pendulum and smooth movement of the clock's hands. One staff probably noticed my perplexion and told me that the clock's mechanic broke and was converted to a quartz clock. 

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Nice! Everything is dancing. The halted pendulum is dancing too. -陶陶三- 给 陶陶三 发送悄悄话 陶陶三 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/24/2021 postreply 09:58:36

Grandfather Clock-:))&-Home-,hickory, dickory,dork-:)).. -青松站- 给 青松站 发送悄悄话 青松站 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/24/2021 postreply 09:58:41

Real fun! -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/24/2021 postreply 20:35:58

I had a clock like that; wait, I’m kind of like that. :) -ibelieu- 给 ibelieu 发送悄悄话 ibelieu 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/24/2021 postreply 11:08:36

The plot of the poem is ingeniously conceived. :) -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/24/2021 postreply 12:20:10

真想象不出时间的尽头是什么 -移花接木- 给 移花接木 发送悄悄话 移花接木 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/24/2021 postreply 12:36:25

谢谢读贴 -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/24/2021 postreply 20:36:42

喜欢上联,觉得可以结束在 “halted”,更有余味 -天玉之- 给 天玉之 发送悄悄话 天玉之 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/24/2021 postreply 21:29:26

好诗!有联想!我有一个这样的表!也联想到时间那条无岸之河! -天山晨- 给 天山晨 发送悄悄话 天山晨 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/25/2021 postreply 06:53:09

This is a really nice poem. Love it! -甜虫虫- 给 甜虫虫 发送悄悄话 甜虫虫 的博客首页 (256 bytes) () 06/25/2021 postreply 12:20:31

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