【ChildhoodFantasy】 Infinity

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Infinity

Staring at ME in a mirror
Please answer
How do I reach Infinity
Sure
Me's answer as silent as divinity
Erect another mirror behind your path
Chase life in the bouncing light
Your journey as eternal as in math

vaguely philosophical © a year ago, xx   life   
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Jenny Middleton - I like the visual reality of this poem Bashan, anyone that's ever looked in a mirror to see another mirror reflection of the back of their head will understand how clever this imagery is as a metaphor of eternity, journey and self perception.11 months ago 

 

K.P2 - Great poem and good use of metaphors. Also a good lesson at the enda year ago 

 

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• 哇， 这是目前我读过你的诗里最喜欢的一首！Jenny的评论真棒，把你的诗洞察得一清二楚！ -beautifulwind- ♀ 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/08/2021 postreply 09:05:05

• Again..Vincent.. -青松站- ♀ 给 青松站 发送悄悄话 青松站 的博客首页 (325 bytes) () 06/08/2021 postreply 09:30:25

• 镜子套镜子确实就是无限拉长影像，我记得拍过这样一张照片，想不到成了你诗的内容，写得好！ -天山晨- ♂ 给 天山晨 发送悄悄话 天山晨 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/08/2021 postreply 09:48:46

• 我小时候的一道数学考题，天安门上有多少个国徽 -移花接木- ♂ 给 移花接木 发送悄悄话 移花接木 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/08/2021 postreply 10:39:31

• 你怎么答的？无数个？ -beautifulwind- ♀ 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/08/2021 postreply 20:31:45

• I think is very well done! -何仙姑- ♀ 给 何仙姑 发送悄悄话 何仙姑 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/08/2021 postreply 12:02:44

• 写得真棒！ -盈盈一笑间- ♀ 给 盈盈一笑间 发送悄悄话 盈盈一笑间 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/08/2021 postreply 17:54:05

• 谢谢 -颤音- ♂ 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/09/2021 postreply 08:12:31

• 恭喜颤音。首页进来，谢谢网管，CF活动 Infinity 推荐成功 -beautifulwind- ♀ 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/11/2021 postreply 17:10:49

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