【ChildhoodFantasy】Once upon a time

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Once upon a time

Once upon a time,
I stepped on half a dime.
For the other half, I searched the playground,
but wished for a pound.
I stumbled and so flied the half dime,
in a curve ended in a lily pond.
I heard giggles as resonating as chime,
before I turned my body around.
It's the girl from my neighbor,
in her hands a snow-white lily flower.
She shrouded me with a smell of thyme,
and left on my bruised lips a taste of lime.

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This is a poem just for a poem and well constructed, alive and happy.4 years ago 

 

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• Nice！Your poem rhymes as lyrics！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/07/2021 postreply 08:12:14

• 学习了,真有意思,为了押韵也是够拼了, 我理解是为了押韵把nickel叫1/2 dime, 而不是真的半拉1角硬币 -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/07/2021 postreply 08:33:44

• 都是，所以是fantasy，谢谢 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2021 postreply 07:36:50

• 很有心思的E诗，雅韵的诗确实读来好听！ -天山晨- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/07/2021 postreply 13:12:31

• 很有心思的E诗，雅韵的诗确实读来好听！ - 天山晨 -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2021 postreply 07:00:35

• 谢谢阅读点评 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2021 postreply 07:37:48

• Once upon a time.. -青松站- ♀ (264 bytes) () 06/08/2021 postreply 13:03:46