【梅雨潭的爱】【Time to say good bye】

开了15年的爱车被冰雹砸了，被保险公司报废了。车子被拖走的那天有感而写。

【Time to say good bye】

It seems to be last night

You came with beauty and shy

Washed you all the time

Made you prettier and shine

With the years passed by

We traveled to parks and countryside

Even to cities mile high

So much joy and delight

Memories bring me smile

Also make me want to cry

Happy journey ended with hailing and flash light

Now it's time to say good bye

With tears in my eye

I cannot decide what to buy

A new convertible sounds about right

Will make me cool and my numbered hair fly

Hope my wife will not have my dream denied

Make me again a happy guy

 

 

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• 好有趣的小诗！短评最后两句:Happy wife, happy life. Make your wife happy first -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (177 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 07:30:21

• Absolutely :) Good point :) -以美丽回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 07:33:22

• Good advice. -ibelieu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 07:49:33

• I really like this piece; sad, full of nostalgia, at first, and -ibelieu- ♀ (308 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 07:42:54

• Thank you very much for your compliments. -以美丽回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 07:48:33

• your love to your old car won't die -唐古- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 07:56:42

• I think so too :-) -以美丽回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 11:41:40

• 唯一美中不足，就是完美。：-） -陶陶三- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 08:06:39

• :-) Thank you very much -以美丽回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 11:42:11

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• 谢谢版主 ：-） -以美丽回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 11:43:02

• Well write ! Old love is true love. -轻轻的我来- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 11:46:15

• U mean, new love is not true love?:) -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 12:44:34

• new love needs testing. -轻轻的我来- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 13:44:55

• Thanks. Love is love :-) -以美丽回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 13:43:32

• excellent writing! -日月茗- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 12:50:00

• Thank you :-) -以美丽回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2021 postreply 13:44:26

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• 这歌词真牛 -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/18/2021 postreply 12:57:34

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• Thank you, will do :-) -以美丽回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/18/2021 postreply 14:45:05

• 写得真好啊！泪中带笑：） -爱听歌的奥黛丽- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/18/2021 postreply 16:31:47

• :-) -以美丽回答一切- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/19/2021 postreply 05:40:46