诗人写诗,是写心中之妙,或简单说,是一种感觉,是在心间的流动,所以是很自然的,但有时不知道原因。
我刚才恍然大悟,最后一句的主语,就是“Often sitting in the attic with dove”。整个动名词结构做主语,是爸爸坐在阁楼上吹笛子,还有象征爱情的鸽子,整个做主语。而“the melody”,我从一开始就是当做“love”的比喻。你可以说“Flew his love/the love melody into her heart”,但一定要说那么清楚么?
Often sitting in the attic with dove
Flew the melody into her heart
这就对了。:-)