试着改了一下语法：

来源: beautifulwind 于 2021-05-13 17:50:27 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (2535 bytes)
本帖于 2021-05-13 18:01:39 时间, 由普通用户 beautifulwind 编辑

“When Ｉstarted singing, birds vanished
When I started playing my guitar, people ran away.
Ｉfelt sad and lonely.
A fish jumped out of water laughing at me.
I BBQed it with acetylene torch.”

原则：一句话里只有一个谓语（动词）
 

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