Thanks sooooo much for your correction. I am looking forward to

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 this type of comments. It's really helpful!!!得意

I would like to move " lonely" before the word "shadow". Is it better? 

Playing with my lonely shadow,  I rise to dance,

So why not stay on earth?

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