韵脚更清晰了

来源: 移花接木于 2020-11-19 15:38:29 [档案] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (0 bytes)

回答: 末句改成这样是不是更好一些：ripples in spring breeze as old time coming by 由忒绿于 2020-11-19 15:21:00

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