Very nice :)

来源: 甜虫虫 于 2020-11-07 23:20:54 [] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (459 bytes)
回答: 1107 Banana Republic 由 小公主 于 2020-11-07 18:00:08

How about reorganizing the first two sentences like this:

The first thing I do after I wake up every moring, is to watch PBS News Hour on YouTube. I then brush my teeth, take a shower, and eat breakfast.

Just a suggestion :)

 

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