The Chant of Life (1)

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The Chant of Life (1)

April 20

 

On the day of creation
God sees everything as good

In his eyes, there is only her
In her eyes, there is only him
In their eyes, there is always God

Eden, the paradise
Where trees are always green
Where the land is embedded with grass and flowers
Where fruits are abundant

But you fall
And you fail
You have started the first fear in human''s endless fear in life
Fear, the psyche sign of crime
Relation lost

Expelled out of Eden
Toil starts
Travail, Travail
An imperfect life is what you are doomed
The cost of crime

 

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love it although not a christian! -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 04/20/2016 postreply 20:01:00

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Wonderful poem. Love it. -~叶子~- 给 ~叶子~ 发送悄悄话 ~叶子~ 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/21/2016 postreply 12:45:04

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很感人的好诗。 -井龙和- 给 井龙和 发送悄悄话 井龙和 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/23/2016 postreply 08:02:36

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