A Protest

本帖于 2016-02-26 16:47:28 时间, 由普通用户 Flyingstraw 编辑

“Satellite ham soaking lapsed stencil mirrored  before  pyrite faked  appliances”

These are the words my teacher wants me to use in my poem. I struggled for two days and even cannot form a draft. I hate restriction, I do not like those words, I do not feel about them. When I feel I am inhibited, I cannot write. I am missing the impulse; my subject does not find me.  So I am writing a protest here.

 

A Protest ( Feb.26)

 

Giving words for articulation

is like being showed how to live a life.

Who’s voice?  Who’s story?

Why should I care? 

I am not related to them, a pile of

dead syllabus

 

If not related, there is

no meaning or purpose after all

I like the word- relation; I like the word- life

Relation is between people, life is all living above

I am missing both to create

something not dumb.

 

Assignments can be

stupid and deprived. I cannot believe

thousands of people have to go through them, in order

to get a mark. In fact, can the trace we left

be numbered?

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向老师提抗议,勇敢:)~~~ -南山松- 给 南山松 发送悄悄话 南山松 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/26/2016 postreply 17:35:51

too frustrated:)) Thanks! -Flyingstraw- 给 Flyingstraw 发送悄悄话 Flyingstraw 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/26/2016 postreply 18:54:04

Obviously you did more than twice the work. -井龙和- 给 井龙和 发送悄悄话 井龙和 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/26/2016 postreply 18:57:16

i guess not a smart way:)) -Flyingstraw- 给 Flyingstraw 发送悄悄话 Flyingstraw 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/26/2016 postreply 19:02:05

An articulate protest! 教授对好学生就是要求严:) -youdecide- 给 youdecide 发送悄悄话 youdecide 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/28/2016 postreply 07:56:06

With your words, feeling better:)) -Flyingstraw- 给 Flyingstraw 发送悄悄话 Flyingstraw 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/29/2016 postreply 07:02:09

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