转一段中英对照,可以看得出来,英译时我已经顺便做了再创作

回答: 首部自翻的小说发表虔谦2015-11-29 06:11:16

雨下得好大。雨声里我想起了布莱恩和汤姆,还有哥哥跟我一起在中国度过的数个寒冬。我突然想起来,美国和中国最大的节日都是在一年最冷的日子里……
红红的火在壁炉里从容地燃着。      
                                          
                                   

The rain was now pouring down outside. Hearing the sound of water coming down I thought of Brian and Tom and I thought of the winters that Dakun and I had spent in China. Those cold days were on my mind and I wondered why the biggest holidays in the American and China both fell in the coldest season.

A fire was burning inside the fireplace as the music continued, “Joyful, Joyful…”

 

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