We feel for you

本帖于 2015-11-22 18:24:40 时间, 由普通用户 youdecide 编辑
回答: I Am Composing A SongFlyingstraw2015-11-20 16:28:48

 

把上面 Poe 的 Alone 乱改了下:

A man and a woman, a perfect pair
One handsome and the other fair
All night the two would bill and coo
While she's aching for him to woo
Suddenly in an autumn dawn
Of a rainy day, he was gone
Without a sound, without a word
(Which is a mystery). Then is heard
In ev'ry depth of heat and chill
The yearning song which rings grief still
In the river, or the fountain
On the bare slope of the mountain
In the sun that rolls around her
On the winterscape of silver
In the lightning, the thunder, and the storm
And the cloud that takes any form
We feel her passions that she does bring
As we once drank from a common spring 

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Wow, wow... -Flyingstraw- 给 Flyingstraw 发送悄悄话 Flyingstraw 的博客首页 (558 bytes) () 11/22/2015 postreply 15:38:31

added -youdecide- 给 youdecide 发送悄悄话 youdecide 的博客首页 (98 bytes) () 11/22/2015 postreply 18:31:12

不加可能也行。 -肖庄- 给 肖庄 发送悄悄话 肖庄 的博客首页 (142 bytes) () 11/23/2015 postreply 13:14:04

谢谢,向你学了冠词。 -youdecide- 给 youdecide 发送悄悄话 youdecide 的博客首页 (650 bytes) () 11/23/2015 postreply 18:49:04

Tks肖庄 ! Both -Flyingstraw- 给 Flyingstraw 发送悄悄话 Flyingstraw 的博客首页 (556 bytes) () 11/24/2015 postreply 07:35:15

A well-written poem. -斓婷- 给 斓婷 发送悄悄话 斓婷 的博客首页 (65 bytes) () 11/23/2015 postreply 19:04:28

斓婷好。我在学习古诗:) -youdecide- 给 youdecide 发送悄悄话 youdecide 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/23/2015 postreply 19:31:54

Please post it separately, really well written! -Flyingstraw- 给 Flyingstraw 发送悄悄话 Flyingstraw 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/24/2015 postreply 07:47:56

Thanks again. I enjoy reading your poems. 可能下次再贴:) -youdecide- 给 youdecide 发送悄悄话 youdecide 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/24/2015 postreply 19:33:44

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