Riptide

本帖于 2016-02-17 19:58:12 时间, 由普通用户 Flyingstraw 编辑

Riptide (August 25)

 

I tried to reach the other shore
wishing to reach you

I sank into the water
not realizing what pulled me down below

The voice was floating
quickly drowned before memory sets

Sun rises
Sun sets
Deep inside that shadow hides

Nothing happened
Nothing gone
Nothing will change the world around

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生动形象的小诗,若配上你的朗诵就更好了。 -~叶子~- 给 ~叶子~ 发送悄悄话 ~叶子~ 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/25/2015 postreply 12:45:31

TKS ...might later on -Flyingstraw- 给 Flyingstraw 发送悄悄话 Flyingstraw 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/25/2015 postreply 19:39:33

A well-written poem. Happy Labor Day to you. -婉蕠- 给 婉蕠 发送悄悄话 婉蕠 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/07/2015 postreply 11:34:34

TKS. Same to you. -Flyingstraw- 给 Flyingstraw 发送悄悄话 Flyingstraw 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/07/2015 postreply 14:01:50

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