I don't know if it is appropriate for me to say this,

来源: rancho2008 于 2015-07-30 21:13:46 [] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (174 bytes)
回答: I should have been home yesterday 由 JasmineZ 于 2015-07-30 14:07:48

but could you get someone to proofread your essay first? A high school student or even a junior high school student should be able to catch many simple errors in your essay.

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