If you turn on your auto-speller, you can at least get rid of so

simple errors. There are quite a lot of grammatical errors in your essay (I did not have the time to finish reading it). I think you need to work on the use of preposition, noun, and article (both definite and indefinite). I am quite busy this weekend and early next week, but will try to find time to correct some of your errors later next week. Meanwhile, hope people here will correct them before me.

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• Thank you. I look forward to the input from you and everyone. -JasmineZ- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/19/2015 postreply 10:18:52

• Nobody corrected those errors? There are more than 50, I think. -rancho2008- ♀ (165 bytes) () 07/21/2015 postreply 23:41:45

• I corrected a number of mistakes. -JasmineZ- ♀ (77 bytes) () 07/23/2015 postreply 07:27:05

• Okay, it's good you have corrected some of them yourself, -rancho2008- ♀ (5571 bytes) () 07/23/2015 postreply 15:28:09

• I am grateful. I updated the writing. -JasmineZ- ♀ (992 bytes) () 07/25/2015 postreply 04:07:13

• More discussion -rancho2008- ♀ (3323 bytes) () 07/25/2015 postreply 11:20:06

• I can't thank you enough! -JasmineZ- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/26/2015 postreply 03:39:35

• Nice proof-reading and correction. -niteBynite- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/26/2015 postreply 05:46:35

• Thank you. Let the colors in the text signify my appreciations -JasmineZ- ♀ (55 bytes) () 07/26/2015 postreply 05:58:30