Thank you everyone. Especially for the corrections.

回答: Once upon a time - updated versionJasmineZ2015-07-09 08:07:32

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If you're not an English major, you write pretty well; but there -rancho2008- 给 rancho2008 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 07/10/2015 postreply 09:11:00

but there are much more errors than pointed out here. -rancho2008- 给 rancho2008 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 07/10/2015 postreply 09:11:58

Agreed. Please point out. Thanks in advance. -JasmineZ- 给 JasmineZ 发送悄悄话 JasmineZ 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/10/2015 postreply 13:29:10

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