"Working in a bakery factory gave me two blisters to my right palm and pain to my toes on both feet."
=> two blisters in the right palm?
=> pain in the toes of both feet?
I'm not too sure, either. Just some suggestions.
She looked at the sentence and said she would put it this way: "Working in a bakery factory gave me two blisters on my right palm and made my feet hurt."
=> two blisters in the right palm?
=> pain in the toes of both feet?
I'm not too sure, either. Just some suggestions.
She looked at the sentence and said she would put it this way: "Working in a bakery factory gave me two blisters on my right palm and made my feet hurt."