Undisturbed

本帖于 2014-07-01 13:38:04 时间, 由普通用户 justlook 编辑

Far away from the bustle of a populous city
A man sat in a corner, between a mountain and a river
Undisturbed, watching the ebb and flow of the wrinkled water
How did he get there, being unclothed in the air?
What was he pondering on, life, love, lore or nature's law?
Didn't he see the dark dense masses in the sky
Or hear the pantings and pipings in the woods?
Perhaps he pondered on not what I pondered on
He saw not what I saw and he heard not what I heard
O the most unvanquishable! The man who freed himself
From art, literature, science, philosophy, power and passion

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写得真好,犹如素描画: a man, mountain, river, pondering on... -紫君- 给 紫君 发送悄悄话 紫君 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/30/2014 postreply 20:09:25

Thank you! -justlook- 给 justlook 发送悄悄话 (109 bytes) () 06/30/2014 postreply 20:47:26

Yes, a poetic picture. -聚曦亭- 给 聚曦亭 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 00:20:37

Thank you. I still need to improve it. -justlook- 给 justlook 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 07:54:56

beautiful! -好学又好问- 给 好学又好问 发送悄悄话 好学又好问 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 07:15:24

Thank you for your encouragement. -justlook- 给 justlook 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 07:55:46

Nicely made. Thank you. -马下人- 给 马下人 发送悄悄话 马下人 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 07:49:02

Thanks! I am learning to write. -justlook- 给 justlook 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 07:56:33

This poem mades a good lyric for a song~~~ -京燕花园- 给 京燕花园 发送悄悄话 京燕花园 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 09:00:18

wow, interesting. I am impressed. Thanks! -justlook- 给 justlook 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 09:19:27

He was hopeless:). Thank you. -justlook- 给 justlook 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 07/01/2014 postreply 11:33:13

Yes, a poetic picture. Good description! -~叶子~- 给 ~叶子~ 发送悄悄话 ~叶子~ 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/02/2014 postreply 20:32:51

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