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回答: 翻译《月亮代表我的心》歌词 由 马下人 于 2014-03-24 20:03:41

月亮代表我的心 The Moon Shines on My Heart ==> How about "my heart is bright as the moon"?

深深的一段情 So briefly we were together ==> How about "such a deep affection"?
教我思念到如今 The sweetness lingering forever ==> How about "I miss it day and night till now"?

你去看一看 you'll know when you look ==> How about "you'll see when you look"?

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