回复：Stop Twice (A Writing Exercise) 一个写作练习

来源: wave_forest 于 2014-02-27 13:20:23 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (316 bytes)


"Oh, you didn't even say hello to me this morning." Nancy said.

"Yes I was so busy. " I explained. --> "No, I didn't. I was ...

... is paint up and powder up and go bad! --> ... is to paint up, powder up and go bad!

 

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• It was just the oppsite. -wave_forest- ♂ 给 wave_forest 发送悄悄话 wave_forest 的博客首页 (2 bytes) () 02/27/2014 postreply 14:41:34

• 回复：谢谢指出病句。让我想起有些他们日常说的 I go get it等句应该是病句吧？ -wave_forest- ♂ 给 wave_forest 发送悄悄话 wave_forest 的博客首页 (372 bytes) () 02/27/2014 postreply 14:40:21

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