nice to read

来源: nitebynite 2013-10-07 10:40:15 [] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读: 次 (576 bytes)
回答: 写作练习-小说 "Mei's Journey"Pandabear2013-10-05 07:03:55
Following catch my eyes and just my comments: 


It uses to be that:
It used to be that 

because people cannot help to slow down on the freeway:
because people cannot help but slow down on the freeway or 
because people cannot help slowing down on the freeway 

The food was good, like always: 
The food was good, as always: 

and the conversation went quiet well. 
and the conversation went quite well. (typo)

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Thank you so much! -Pandabear- 给 Pandabear 发送悄悄话 Pandabear 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 10/07/2013 postreply 12:38:22

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