like your writing...

May I discuss with you on the following sentences?

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is impacted -> is impacting?

I almost forgot when last time I went to the local library was -> I almost forgot when was the last time I went to the local library?

Today was gorgeous day -> Today was a gorgeous day? or Today was gorgeous?

I decide to read the series bestselling novels wrote by Suzanne Collins. -> I decide to read the series bestselling novels written by Suzanne Collins?

the lobby of library -> the lobby of the library ?

There were only handful people reading there -> There were only a handful of people reading there?

the books are available are much less than before -> the books available are much less than before?

No doubt about that now the library is likely affected by internet too. -> No doubt that now the library is likely affected by internet too?

but there is no evidence shows that it will stop to cause more damages -> but there is no evidence showing that it will stop to cause more damages?

it could be not bad idea -> it may not be a bad idea?

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• 谢谢你逐字帮我修改句子，本人写英文从来不考虑语法否则写不下去。 -Aspector- ♂ (88 bytes) () 08/06/2013 postreply 18:14:23

• long time no see. 问好！ -好学又好问- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/07/2013 postreply 05:58:48

• Nice see you again. -Aspector- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/07/2013 postreply 07:10:31

• same here. -好学又好问- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/07/2013 postreply 09:01:00