Gatsby: trying to translate the last paragraph of first chapter

I decided to call to him. Miss Baker had mentioned him at dinner, and that would do for an introduction. But I didn’t call to him, for he gave a sudden intimation that he was content to be alone — he stretched out his arms toward the dark water in a curious way, and, far as I was from him, I could have sworn he was trembling. Involuntarily I glanced seaward — and distinguished nothing except a single green light, minute and far away, that might have been the end of a dock. When I looked once more for Gat*****y he had vanished, and I was alone again in the unquiet darkness.

 

我决定向他介绍自己。因为贝克小姐曾在晚饭时提起过他，我可用这作为开场白。但我没有，因为他似乎给了一个​​突然的暗示，就是他此时此刻更愿独处。他奇怪的朝黑暗的水面伸出双臂。即便离他很远，我发誓看到他在颤抖。我不由自主地向海面望去，除了似乎在码头尽头的地方有一小小的禄色的光点外,其他什末也看不到。当我的目光再次寻找Gat*****y时，他却已经消失了，又将我孤身一人留在了这并不平静的夜色里。

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• 喜欢看你们的翻译。：） -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 15:05:11

• 谢谢美风鼓励 -同学小薇- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 15:11:14

• vely nice! 祝贺小薇读完第一章了！我还没读完，呵呵。 -非文学青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 15:34:22

• 谢谢文青。好多地方我就囫仑吞枣混过去啦。。。：-） -同学小薇- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 15:40:19

• 嘿嘿，差不多就行，总有收获的。 -非文学青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 15:42:31

• Nicely done! A good way to learn! -NewVoice- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 16:27:48

• "in the unquiet darkness" 很有寓意。 -yingyudidida- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 18:08:05

• Diner译为晩饭就可以了。 -bmdn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 18:13:10

• Agreed. Thanks! -同学小薇- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 21:10:44

• 翻的好。 -EnLearner- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 19:51:30

• Good job. -DCH- ♂ (540 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 20:48:57

• 关于call to -同学小薇- ♀ (199 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 21:19:27

• 一并感谢楼上朋友们的feedback -同学小薇- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 21:22:18

• go xiaowei go! Good job! :) -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/13/2012 postreply 02:39:06