跟竹马后面读两段The Great Gatsby,欢迎拍砖讨论

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This responsiveness had nothing to do with that flabby impressionability which is dignified under the name of the ‘creative temperament’— it was an extraordinary gift for hope, a romantic readiness such as I have never found in any other person and which it is not likely I shall ever find again. No—Gat*****y turned out all right at the end; it is what preyed on Gat*****y, what foul dust floated in the wake of his dreams that temporarily closed out my interest in the abortive sorrows and short- winded elations of men.

My family have been prominent, well-to-do people in this middle-western city for three generations. The Carraways are something of a clan and we have a tradition that we’re descended from the Dukes of Buccleuch, but the actual founder of my line was my grandfather’s brother who came here in fifty-one, sent a substitute to the Civil War and started the wholesale hardware business that my father carries on today.

I never saw this great-uncle but I’m supposed to look like him—with special reference to the rather hard-boiled painting that hangs in Father’s office. I graduated from New Haven in 1915, just a quarter of a century after my father, and a little later I participated in that delayed Teutonic migration known as the Great War. I enjoyed the counter-raid so thoroughly that I came back restless. Instead of being the warm center of the world the middle-west now seemed like the ragged edge of the universe—so I decided to go east and learn the bond business. Everybody I knew was in the bond business so I supposed it could support one more single man. All my aunts and uncles talked it over as if they were choosing a prep-school for me and finally said, ‘Why—ye- es’ with very grave, hesitant faces. Father agreed to finance me for a year and after various delays I came east, permanently, I thought, in the spring of twenty-two.

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Pretty good. One slip-up: -jingbeiboy- 给 jingbeiboy 发送悄悄话 jingbeiboy 的博客首页 (251 bytes) () 09/06/2012 postreply 19:13:26

读得好,很清晰。 -EnLearner- 给 EnLearner 发送悄悄话 EnLearner 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/06/2012 postreply 20:21:48

回复:跟竹马后面读两段The Great Gatsby,欢迎拍砖讨论 -truth_lover99- 给 truth_lover99 发送悄悄话 (50 bytes) () 09/07/2012 postreply 02:11:59

一并谢谢楼上同学! -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/07/2012 postreply 07:23:47

Very nicely done. -北京二号- 给 北京二号 发送悄悄话 北京二号 的博客首页 (38 bytes) () 09/07/2012 postreply 09:45:52

谢谢二姐鼓励!下一步还得坚持读。 -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/07/2012 postreply 10:06:34

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