小作文练习:My Classmate Lucy

本帖于 2012-07-30 22:23:50 时间, 由版主 林贝卡 编辑

           My college  class mate Lucy  was born in Vietnam  in a  Chinese family. With short hair, big eyes,  black frame glasses on her high nose bridge,   she  always had a pleasant smile on her face.  She was  a healthy and good looking girl.  However,  by the time I met her she was wearing dental braces because of her  bad looking  teeth.    She had lived in Montreal  for 6 years before she moved to Ontario with her family. She had two older brothers and an older sister, so she is the baby in her family. She is a lively and vivacious person with a good sense of humor that she always made me laugh.  

        Because she is a happy person, I enjoyed hanging  out with her. We always liked to do things together.  We studied together, we  ate together and went to the library together.  Together, we were so-called  happy campers.  Despite the pressure from school,  during the  break time, we always had fun and burst out into loud laughter.  We always did our best to schedule our classes together,  but sometimes we didn't mind if we had conflict  time slots,  because  we even thought it might  be better off --good for us for exchanging study information from the same teacher teaching different schedules.

         Lucy helped me a lot with my study. She  can speak Cantonese, French, Vietnamese  and  Mandarin.  Speaking English with some French accent she sometimes corrected my pronunciations,  and  today I still  remember the words she corrected me, such as value, system, etc.   We had quite a few things in common, for example,  we are almost the same age,  and  we were born in the same country.  But the difference was I grew up in China and she  was raised in  Vietnam. 

         In our last year of college,  we  met  many  international  students from Shandong, China. They   were taking business courses in our campus,  preparing  for their further study in university.  Two girls from Shandong later on became our good friends.  

          In retrospect,  back then we had so much fun at school, but today we can only chat in the Facebook and phone. 

 

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basically it's a good compostion -海外逸士- 给 海外逸士 发送悄悄话 海外逸士 的博客首页 (532 bytes) () 07/30/2012 postreply 05:56:02

感谢逸士老师光临指导!我会仔细学习您帮修正的部分。 -sportwoman- 给 sportwoman 发送悄悄话 sportwoman 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/30/2012 postreply 07:01:26

generally you can use "be the same age", -海外逸士- 给 海外逸士 发送悄悄话 海外逸士 的博客首页 (81 bytes) () 07/30/2012 postreply 13:50:12

多谢逸老师指正!上学的时候时间都花在做作业和看教科书上,很少有时间练习写作和英语思维。 -sportwoman- 给 sportwoman 发送悄悄话 sportwoman 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/30/2012 postreply 15:01:24

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