又听了几遍, 大体上很好, 节奏,快慢都很合适.很顺耳的说,能背这样有自信,已经很了不起了.
个别的发音我就不提了,并没有影响理解的都是好的发音, 你的整体语调把握非常成功.
下面是我根据文章内容分了段,给了些建议,另外说的时候, 把自己的要表达的意思和意念一同容进去.
一家之言, 今供参考!
Several cases have been reported in
One case concerns an eleven-year-old schoolgirl, Vera Petrova, who has normal vision but who can also perceive things give a big pause (with different parts of her skin, and through solid walls) could be grouped together. This ability was first noticed by her father. One day she came into his office and happened to put her hands on the door of a locked safe.Suddenly she asked her father why he kept so many old newspapers locked away there, and even described the way they were done up in bundles. Vera's curious talent was brought to the notice of a scientific research institute in the town of Ulyanovsk, near where she lives(could be done in a lower tone and quicker pace), and in April she was given a series of tests by a special commission of (the Ministry of Health of the Russian Federal Republic)group them together. During these tests she was able to read a newspaper through an opaque screen and, stranger still, by moving her elbow over a child's game of Lotto she was able to describe the figures and colours printed on it; and, in another instance, wearing stockings and slippers, to make out with her foot give a pause(the outlines and colours of a picture hidden under a carpet) group them together. Other experiments showed that her knees and shoulders had a similar sensitivity. Give a big pause here.
During all these tests Vera was blindfold; and, indeed, except when blindfold she lacked the ability to perceive things with her skin. It was also found that although she could perceive things with her fingers this ability ceased the moment her hands were wet.
