My first Sonnet Exercise

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Shall I not bring home the chocolate cake?
I 've been educated not to waste

luggage has been packed like a hippo, not fake.

The flight won't wait,  I 'd better make  haste.

 

I ask  the front desk  about the bus routine,

And the girl says it is coming fast.

Seeing their restaurant ad with poutine,

Reminds me of my unfinished breakfast.

But I  don't want to put on weight.

Maybe I will just have the cake saved?
My seat number is 16F which is eight plus eight,
Sitting next to me, is a man with bear shaved.

 


So long Toronto! The vigorous city, my fave,
what's left of me are the memories my family gave.

 

Shakespeare's Sonnet #18


Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer's lease hath all too short a date.

Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
And often is his gold complexion dimmed;
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;

But thy eternal summer shall not fade,
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
Nor shall death brag thou wanderest in his shade,
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.

by William Shakespeare

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Thanks in advance for giving me some advice! -sportwoman- 给 sportwoman 发送悄悄话 sportwoman 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/09/2012 postreply 20:46:15

流畅自然。向吴总督学习英文和数学。不知总督何时开文艺复兴和十九世纪英国文学课。 -youknowmyheart- 给 youknowmyheart 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 06/09/2012 postreply 23:12:19

能来这里跟各位老师学习是我的最大的荣幸,多谢路过师兄鼓励! -sportwoman- 给 sportwoman 发送悄悄话 sportwoman 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/10/2012 postreply 04:40:25

你是这里的老师,我们都是学生。向你学习。 -youknowmyheart- 给 youknowmyheart 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 06/10/2012 postreply 09:09:22

我可能比你老,但当不了您老师啊。:) -sportwoman- 给 sportwoman 发送悄悄话 sportwoman 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/10/2012 postreply 09:21:24

Nice! -hammerheadshark- 给 hammerheadshark 发送悄悄话 (41 bytes) () 06/09/2012 postreply 23:32:03

多谢鲨鱼兄!genuflect! -sportwoman- 给 sportwoman 发送悄悄话 sportwoman 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/10/2012 postreply 04:42:48

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美女! 让我欲眼望穿,不知道何故,真看不到你照片。 -sportwoman- 给 sportwoman 发送悄悄话 sportwoman 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/10/2012 postreply 04:44:57

连不是美女的,个人户口里我自己的照片也看不见了。 -sportwoman- 给 sportwoman 发送悄悄话 sportwoman 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/10/2012 postreply 07:53:37

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