Learning to Write a Sonnet(ZT)

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It's fun to take that form and apply it to a contemporary creation:

 

Learning to Write a Sonnet

The sonnet form is old and full of dust
And yet I want to learn to write one well.
To learn new forms and grow is quite a must,
But I will learn it quickly, I can tell.

And so I sit, today, with pen in hand,
Composing three new quatrains with a rhyme.
The rhythm flows like wind at my command.
The A-B-A-B form consumes my time.

But I’m not done until there’s fourteen lines.
One ending couplet, after three quatrains.
I’ve tried to write this new form several times.
The effort’s huge; I have to rack my brain.

But I persist, my fourteen lines now done.
I wrote my poem; my sonnet work is won.

by Denise Rodgers

 

Shakespeare's Sonnet #18


Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer's lease hath all too short a date.

Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
And often is his gold complexion dimmed;
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;

But thy eternal summer shall not fade,
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
Nor shall death brag thou wanderest in his shade,
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.

by William Shakespeare

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第一首:是 there's fourteen lines 还是 there are fourteen lines? -youknowmyheart- 给 youknowmyheart 发送悄悄话 (28 bytes) () 06/09/2012 postreply 09:55:43

要不,待我把今天剩下的早餐吃完了就去把作者抓来问一问? -sportwoman- 给 sportwoman 发送悄悄话 sportwoman 的博客首页 (53 bytes) () 06/09/2012 postreply 15:42:05

maybe he/she considers -sportwoman- 给 sportwoman 发送悄悄话 sportwoman 的博客首页 (48 bytes) () 06/09/2012 postreply 15:25:56

要想把这第一首诗读成真正的sonnet,需要三个人来读 -youknowmyheart- 给 youknowmyheart 发送悄悄话 (126 bytes) () 06/10/2012 postreply 09:22:53

嗯,还得要把rice 读成lice ,这个光荣的任务就交给我吧。 -sportwoman- 给 sportwoman 发送悄悄话 sportwoman 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/10/2012 postreply 09:59:15

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