Nice one! Sis. I want to watch it too.

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回答: 隆重推荐电影 “Midnight in Paris"NewVoice2012-05-23 09:16:11

 van Gogh’s painting “The Starry Night”.

the “good old day”--> I think it should be "days".

Gil Penter, the protagonist of the movie, is a Hollywood screenwriter who idolizes Hemingway, Fitzgerald, and many other great writers and artists in the 1920s. --> not completely sure, but I would remove the "the" before "protaganist". "in the 1920s", I would use "from the 1920s".

 which makes him realize that it is an illusion to think that the past is better than the present, and that he must get rid of this myth about the past in order to become a good writer..--> a little unclear whether the third "that" is parallel to the first "that" or the second one. maybe start a new sentence.

I am sure that our era may someday become a: to me "am sure" and "may" kind of contradict each other a little bit.

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What is nice surprise! -NewVoice- 给 NewVoice 发送悄悄话 NewVoice 的博客首页 (374 bytes) () 05/23/2012 postreply 10:25:02

haha, Sis, a "gotcha" moment. -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (723 bytes) () 05/23/2012 postreply 10:36:38

Yes, you got me. 谢谢妹妹! -NewVoice- 给 NewVoice 发送悄悄话 NewVoice 的博客首页 (1035 bytes) () 05/23/2012 postreply 11:46:27

真高兴又看到你!!! -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (73 bytes) () 05/23/2012 postreply 10:31:52

greetings, meifeng! -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (331 bytes) () 05/23/2012 postreply 10:47:24

En, take your time。 But really miss you。:) -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 05/23/2012 postreply 11:02:49

Thanks for the correction. -星星- 给 星星 发送悄悄话 星星 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 05/23/2012 postreply 14:42:57

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