- to get something for free -> getting something for free (not sure)
Both are fine. I don’t think there is much difference in meaning.
http://www.sonnerct.com/English_Rules/LR10_Gerunds_Infinitives.htm#300
- double bouble -> typo?
Typo.
- small words -> fine print
Agree, “fine print” is much better.
- I used flawless English made the order -> used flawlee English to make
Agree.
- It was a Sunday morning, I set off -> it was a sunday morning, and I set off
Agree, need an “and” there.
- Tim Hortons or the Tim Hortons?
Normally, Tim Hortons as a band does not need “the”, unless I am referring to a particular location.
