美风,应你的跟帖,也相应文青的呼吁,对你读的也说一说我的看法。
同时也静候高手加入探讨。声明一下,我不是高手,只是对这个感兴趣。
我总体感觉是你读英语象唱英语,原因有两个:滑音太多;升调太多 (Gliding and too many rising intonation).
VOA: "-A" 你的升调 vs. 原读的平调。
internaiitinal: '-nai-' 你用了滑音, vs. 原读的平调 .
spoke to them: you have rising tone at "spoke" and "to them", but the original reading has rising tone at the last word only.
twelfth president: all rising.