跟Bill学,我也读anyone lived in a pretty how town by E. E. Cummings

本帖于 2012-04-17 14:02:24 时间, 由普通用户 非文学青年 编辑

anyone lived in a pretty how town
(with up so floating many bells down)
spring summer autumn winter
he sang his didn't he danced his did

Women and men(both little and small)
cared for anyone not at all
they sowed their isn't they reaped their same|
sun moon stars rain

children guessed(but only a few
and down they forgot as up they grew
autumn winter spring summer)
that noone loved him more by more

when by now and tree by leaf
she laughed his joy she cried his grief
bird by snow and stir by still
anyone's any was all to her

someones married their everyones
laughed their cryings and did their dance
(sleep wake hope and then)they
said their nevers they slept their dream

stars rain sun moon
(and only the snow can begin to explain
how children are apt to forget to remember
with up so floating many bells down)

one day anyone died i guess
(and noone stooped to kiss his face)
busy folk buried them side by side
little by little and was by was

all by all and deep by deep
and more by more they dream their sleep
noone and anyone earth by april
wish by spirit and if by yes.

Women and men(both dong and ding)
summer autumn winter spring
reaped their sowing and went their came
sun moon stars rain

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先占个座。我正开始读900句。争取今天贴上来。。舌头瓣蒜的不行。:) -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 14:02:18

我回家在听。 -yingyudidida- 给 yingyudidida 发送悄悄话 yingyudidida 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 14:31:14

进步神速啊,我就听除了小微提到的 sang:he sang his didn't -yingyudidida- 给 yingyudidida 发送悄悄话 yingyudidida 的博客首页 (29 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 15:57:17

谢谢Bro鼓励! -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (43 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 22:14:57

文青读的真好!小砖渣 -同学小薇- 给 同学小薇 发送悄悄话 同学小薇 的博客首页 (428 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 15:12:28

谢谢薇薇!好砖! -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (73 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 22:16:30

羡慕啊羡慕!!文青你水平涨得太快了。。 -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (1657 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 16:37:48

排队羡慕,美风很长时间不见你出来示范朗读了。 -bingli- 给 bingli 发送悄悄话 bingli 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 16:48:26

主要是很长时间不读,今天一读,难听得把自己恶心着了。。:) -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 16:49:52

感谢美风,也谢谢冰粒鼓励!ng还是发不到位,其实我的n也没有到位,蒙混过关,嘻嘻。 -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 22:17:50

Very nice! -NewVoice- 给 NewVoice 发送悄悄话 NewVoice 的博客首页 (232 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 17:22:40

谢谢姐姐!恩,姐姐说的对,moon和explain是n发得不到位造成的,我觉得。 -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 22:18:49

好好听,发音准,节奏感好,象给孩子念的童谣 :) -lilac09- 给 lilac09 发送悄悄话 lilac09 的博客首页 (30 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 17:29:47

谢谢mm!恩,explain是要浊化才对。 -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (105 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 22:21:12

Enjoyable! -EnLearner- 给 EnLearner 发送悄悄话 EnLearner 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 19:58:55

谢谢愚公! -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/17/2012 postreply 22:21:34

读得好。 可能“oo"的发音在”moon“和”stoop“里发的短了点。 -jingbeiboy- 给 jingbeiboy 发送悄悄话 jingbeiboy 的博客首页 (40 bytes) () 04/18/2012 postreply 05:39:19

谢谢京北,说得对,我回头听了听,尤其stoop太短了。 -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (82 bytes) () 04/18/2012 postreply 06:44:45

不止是发音啊?这节奏,语调也都这么美了! -toast2011- 给 toast2011 发送悄悄话 (81 bytes) () 04/18/2012 postreply 09:42:42

呵呵,谢谢吐司鼓励!还是会有时候喘不上来气 -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/18/2012 postreply 12:00:54

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