and writing!

this part was cut off. some points to consider:

I arrived at (the) parking area of the race site 40 minutes earlier.

I did not try to catch up to it->with it?

more downhillls then uphills: is then a typo?

Of course, behind the number is many hours of training. not completely sure, but I would use are instead of "is" here.

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• Thanks for the compliment and correcting my writting. -EnLearner- ♂ (1703 bytes) () 04/16/2012 postreply 19:33:43

• sorry, my bad. -非文学青年- ♀ (78 bytes) () 04/16/2012 postreply 22:35:21