建议你这次专门学习一下元音/ou/（这个音标我标的不对。就是stone的o的发音。）（汉语拼音类似/偶/）的发音。
也练和短音/u/的音。（as in woods）
你的/ei/的发音进步非常大！
If You Hold My Hand
Oakey's mom opened the front door.(查查字典，要把/奥/和/r/分开读。）
"Come on, Oakey. Let's go outside and explore."
But Oakey wasn't really sure. He was only small, and the world looked big and scary.
"Only if you promise（短音i，似乎你读成长音i的缩短的音了。） to hold my hand," said Oakey.
"This looks like a great place to play. Should we take a look? What do you say（这次你的/ei/的发音都很好，这个似乎没到位，听着像sing的音）?" asked Oakey's mom.
"Only if you promise to hold my hand," said Oakey.
And Oakey did it.
"This slide looks like fun.（这个音你发的不准，查查字典的发音，把你的音录出来同时比较） Would you likt to try?" asked Oakey's mom.
I'm only samll," said Oakey. "I don't know if I could climb that high-unless you hold my hand."
And Oakey did it! "Wheee! Did you see me?" he cried.
"We'll take a short cut through （长音u，你的没到位）the woods," said Oakey's mom.
"I'm not sure if we should," said Oakey. "It looks dark in there. Well I suppose we could-will you hold my hand?"
And Oakey did it! " Boo! I scared you!" he cried.
Deep in the woods（短音u，应该发出来听着像/唔额/的音，你发的是长音u的音。你的look的短音u发的很好）, Oakey found a stream, shaded by beautiful tall trees.
"Stepping stones（发/ou/时，嘴巴是噘出来而且是圆的）, look!" said Oakey's mom. " Do you think you could jump across these?"（应该是长音i，你发的长音不够长。）
"Maybe," said Oakey. "I just need you to hold my hand, please."
And Oakey did it!
Beyond the woods（同上）, Oakey and his mom ran up the hill, and all the way down to the ocean.
"Come on, Oakey," called his mom. "Would you like to wade in the ocean with me?" But the ocean looked big, and he was only small.
Suddenly, Oakey knew that didn't matter at all.
He turned to his mom and smiled（你的l卷舌了，没有r，所以不应该卷舌。） ..."I can do anything if you hold my hand," he said.
