Excellent! a rare combination of advanced reading and writing！

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回答: My first writing - a short novel. 由 hammerheadshark 于 2012-03-10 22:18:54

Hilarious and entertaining! I laughed out loud at the end.Did you miss the part: Mama called the doctor and the doctor said, no more monkeys jumping on the bed. haha.

有一两处我觉得该有the： Rest of (the) stops,  around (the) corner, I chose (the) larger number

an incredibly long name with a few vowels是不是用few vowels更确切？因为我觉得你想说是元音少？

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