wonderful！非常好听，地道！

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回答: My first reading.Some comments, please. 由 hammerheadshark 于 2012-03-07 23:18:50

语感节奏真棒！

under，lunch，deep听着有点off。有一两处的t，d，我觉得发得有点重了。象下面这个：

It knew the weather was too cold to travel.

Pure white snow and ice covered the Earth for as far as he could see.

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• Thank you! I will practise more on those words. -hammerheadshark- ♀ 给 hammerheadshark 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 03/08/2012 postreply 20:49:14

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