念得很好!尤其喜欢how you did " Just gorgeous".

来源: 2msmom 2012-01-29 18:23:35 [] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读: 次 (1632 bytes)

"the greatest show on earth taking place |in the northern sky |every night this week. this is what it looks like in norway. the aurora borealis, shimmering curtains of green |across the sky, visible from europe on over to new england, canada, the northern u.s., all a result of the intense solar flare activity| lately. this is the beautiful part of that solar storm. it has also, of course, impacted communications| and aviation. just gorgeous."

If I have to pick on you, I think you are trying to read the entire paragraph without breathing, which is very hard for anybody.

Besides where the punctuations are, maybe try to pause briefly or very briefly where the bars are and no linkage when pause, that will give you a time to catch your breath and change your tone up and down accordingly.

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非常感谢!非常正确,非常有帮助! -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/29/2012 postreply 20:04:06

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