就这样吧。晚上又碰不到你了。改改吧。应该不会错两位数吧哈哈。

She said I tried to mind my own business.
But that (sad) (look) on your face, was a challenge to my (face).
Made me wanna chase the (dark) out of (all) (you).
So she smiled and said hello.
Little did she know, he would take (hold) of her (soul),
And never never never let go.

He was fine before he met her,
Eyes like (faded) (jeans), soft and blue and he had (seen) everything and he had been everywhere
Til he turned his (gaze) (this) way
(long) to see her everyday
Heard a (voice) (inside) him say
He'll never never never be the same.

Once in a while
Once in a blue moon,
There comes somebody like you.

They (caught) (fire) and they got fever.
He was more than fun
She was more than young
And the (orange) (setting) (sun) was beautiful
Ever so at ease in the summer evening breeze
They would (talk) and they would (tease)
And never never never want to leave.

Once in a while
Once in a blue moon
There comes somebody like you.

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