翻译练习

来源: EnLearner 于 2011-11-27 22:02:28 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (389 bytes)


第一次听到《Song from a Secret Garden》的时刻，正好是某个秋雨敲窗，秋风入梦的夜晚。

In that night when I listened to Song FromA Secert Garden the first time, Autumn rain was beating my windows and Autumn wind was with me in my dreams.

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• 愚公翻得真是诗情画意，我要有你这水平，就用英文介绍了。谢谢支持！ -beautifulwind- ♀ 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/28/2011 postreply 06:46:27

• 多谢美风喜欢。水平有限，也不知译出原意否？ -EnLearner- ♀ 给 EnLearner 发送悄悄话 EnLearner 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/28/2011 postreply 19:43:31

• 把你的翻译updated到原帖里了。谢谢愚公！ -beautifulwind- ♀ 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/28/2011 postreply 07:21:45

• Minor change -EnLearner- ♀ 给 EnLearner 发送悄悄话 EnLearner 的博客首页 (692 bytes) () 11/28/2011 postreply 09:04:39

• I like the version "for the first time", updated. Thanks. -beautifulwind- ♀ 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/28/2011 postreply 09:57:30

• Here, first = for the first time. -EnLearner- ♀ 给 EnLearner 发送悄悄话 EnLearner 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/28/2011 postreply 19:40:05

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