真不愧为文牛教授。

洽洽前面的做的比较好，你则后面的做的好些。

I'll paint my ( moon moond) in (shades ) of ( blue)
Paint my (soul ) to be with you
I'll sketch your lips in (shaded-tone?) (to tone)
Draw your mouth to my own

I'll draw your arms around my (waist )
Then (I'll ) (doubt) I shall (erase )
I'll paint the rain that softly (lands ) on your (wind )-(blown ) hair

I'll (trace ) a hand to (wipe ) (up? out ) your (tears )
A look to (calm ) your (fear )
A silhouette of (dark ) and (light )
While we (hold ) each other (oh开始觉得象all , oh is right) so tight

I'll paint a sun to warm your heart
(swearing ) that we'll never (part )
That's the colour of my love

I'll paint the truth
Show how I feel
Try to make you completely real
I'll use a brush so (light ) and (fine )
To draw you (close ) and make you (mine )

I'll paint a sun to warm your heart
(swearing ) that we'll never (part )
That's the colour of my love

I'll draw the (years ) all ( passing) by
So much to learn so much to try

And with this (ring ) our lives will (start )
(swearing ) that we'll never (part )
I offer (one what ) you cannot buy
Devoted love until we (die )

所有跟帖： 

• 愚教授作业改得真快！谢谢！ -非文学青年- ♀ (136 bytes) () 11/21/2011 postreply 22:00:44

• 回复：愚教授作业改得真快！谢谢！ -EnLearner- ♀ (234 bytes) () 11/21/2011 postreply 22:09:05

• 乐翻了，wipipedia? this is the best, most hilarious typo today! -非文学青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/21/2011 postreply 22:12:56

• Oops :-( -EnLearner- ♀ (124 bytes) () 11/21/2011 postreply 22:15:54