真漂亮! 愚公真是个制贴专家。

本帖于 2011-11-22 04:16:09 时间, 由版主 林贝卡 编辑

 

I'll paint my (mood) in (shade) of (blue)
Paint my (soul) to be with you
I'll sketch your lips in (shade ) (? )
Draw your mouth to my own

I'll draw your arms around my (waist)
Then (I) (die ) I shall (raise )
I'll paint the rain that softly (land) on your (wind )-(blown ) hair

I'll (trace ) a hand to (wipe ) (off ) your ( tears)
A look to ( calm) your (fears )
A silhouette of (dark ) and (light )
While we (hold) each other (hold ) so tight

I'll paint a sun to warm your heart
(so ) that we'll never (part )
That's the colour of my love

I'll paint the truth
Show how I feel
Try to make you completely real
I'll use a brush so (light ) and (fine)
To draw you (close) and make you (mine )

I'll paint a sun to warm your heart
(so) that we'll never (ever part )
That's the colour of my love

I'll draw the (years ) all (passing ) by
So much to learn so much to try

And with this (strength ) our lives will (start )
(so ) that we'll never (part )
I offer (one ) you cannot buy
Devoted love until we (die)

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多谢美言(谬奖)。 NewVoice做的相当好。 -EnLearner- 给 EnLearner 发送悄悄话 EnLearner 的博客首页 (1357 bytes) () 11/21/2011 postreply 19:46:09

谢谢愚公批改!错得可笑哈。 -NewVoice- 给 NewVoice 发送悄悄话 NewVoice 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/22/2011 postreply 03:50:22

不客气。其实你做的很好。 -EnLearner- 给 EnLearner 发送悄悄话 EnLearner 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/22/2011 postreply 18:27:29

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